Date: 05/07/20 12:56 pm Title: Zera or Zera?
I've been waiting for this story to update, but it was worth the wait. A consistent release schedule will never be a substitute for quality story and though this chapter took longer to come out, it was one of my favorites.
I am kinda laughing at the fact that Zera has kinda become a Yugi/Atem situation. Hopefully she a BlackRose can merge eventually, though it would be interesting to see the character shifts that BlackRose might show when she manifests, and that's just on the assumption that she is benevolent. If BlackRose is still the personality that Stien installed in Zeta, she could be fighting to take back control.
All that being said, I'm super excited to see where this story goes from here. There are lots of branching story paths that exist at the moment and I'm excited to see which ones you take.
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate your feedback and I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 05/04/20 02:13 pm Title: The Black Rose
"not before I activate Solemn Judgement, by paying half my life points when you summon a monster, I can destroy it"
Yes, but the sequence of that event was, summon vanguard, activate pot of greed, activate ability right?
So at that point pot of greed would have been negated and destroyed
Not sure if in the anime they ignored stuff like immediate action since they do a lot of bs there. but in general it should have been pot of greed>vanguard>solemn and I'm not sure if vanguards effects would have still gone through.
Author's Response: I'm not sure since Pot of Greed was activated before hand which drew more dragon cards into the hand, and then it was Vanguard of the dragon solemn Judgement was activated after vanguard of the dragons summoning I hope your enjoying the story so far!
Date: 05/04/20 10:42 am Title: Unbreakable
A correction: the card that summons Metal Fiend Tokens is Fiend Sanctuary, not Magical Reflect Slime. This was a good chapter, though I have to say the story is feeling a bit rushed. There could have been some story moments in the middle of their duel in addition to the beginning and the end. That would be my only critique at this point is to slow the pace and just enjoy the tale you're telling.
That and, seriously? The skirt is hella cute, but no pants? He wasn't sure who she'd wake up as, so he got her a top with a bunch of cut outs and a short skirt? Even women like pants lol.
Author's Response: You caught me there lol, I wrote this at 2 in the morning so I guess I was just out of it. It is corrected now though thanks
Date: 04/30/20 12:46 am Title: Horus the Black Flame Dragon
Not to be pedantic or anything, but Flame Swordsman is a Fusion card and can’t be tribute summoned.
Author's Response: Yeah I know lol, I was basing it more off of the show as how Joey wheeler used it and not so much as the actual TCG