Reviews For Glitch in the Code
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Reviewer: Foundling_Fae Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/03/20 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

Morpheus' monologue is so apt as a metaphor for dysphoria, it's cool to see it used that way directly. I always wished that the gender-fluxy details they had originally planned had actually gotten in to the finished product..

Where your language is occasionally awkward, you've still managed to capture, for example, Smith quite convincingly.

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