Reviews For Pier Peers
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/21/20 02:32 am Title: Pier Peers

Loved the story Katie I'm hoping that you will give this a follow up story or chapter on how Sandy & Co. are doing

Reviewer: Rushica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/19/20 02:07 am Title: Pier Peers

I really enjoyed this. The only thing I didn't like was the jump from finding out mermaids are real to Sandys mom knowing about them and apparently werewolves being real with no explanation. You have a great setting for a story verse here. Do you have plans to expand on it? I would really enjoy reading it. Maybe even see the story of this world changing reveal and how it plays out even if it's only known by a few.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/18/20 10:57 pm Title: Pier Peers

Very cute!

Reviewer: girlwithaguitar Signed Report
Date: 04/18/20 05:58 pm Title: Pier Peers

Super cute! My only feedback is that I wish there were more of it. It feels kinda abrupt to go from egg about to crack to mermaid girl in two paragraphs. Seeing her reaction to being a mermaid girl for example would be super cute and wholesome!

Reviewer: Foundling_Fae Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/18/20 05:47 pm Title: Pier Peers

This is a cute little story that is quite enjoyable. The ending is perhaps vague about details, but not excessively - certainly, it is a sufficient closure.

You must login (register) to review.
TG Storytime uses the eFiction engine and Vanilla discussions. Design by J6P.