Date: 04/19/20 02:07 am Title: Pier Peers
I really enjoyed this. The only thing I didn't like was the jump from finding out mermaids are real to Sandys mom knowing about them and apparently werewolves being real with no explanation. You have a great setting for a story verse here. Do you have plans to expand on it? I would really enjoy reading it. Maybe even see the story of this world changing reveal and how it plays out even if it's only known by a few.
Date: 04/18/20 05:58 pm Title: Pier Peers
Super cute! My only feedback is that I wish there were more of it. It feels kinda abrupt to go from egg about to crack to mermaid girl in two paragraphs. Seeing her reaction to being a mermaid girl for example would be super cute and wholesome!