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Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/17/20 03:32 am Title: Blakemere

Nice story to wrap up loose ends. I also liked seeing that Cindy is now fully forgiven.
I usually don't get into long series too much, but this is the exception. Keep writing.

Reviewer: Allendia Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/16/20 06:08 pm Title: Welland

Curse you time and your inevitable betrayal!

I want Baroness Cindy Anne Talbot! The tiny bratty baroness that will drive everyone crazy ehehe. :3

Loved it!

Reviewer: Allendia Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/16/20 06:01 pm Title: Blakemere

I loved this little bit. My heart breaks for that village, but this little background tale of past Embodied and Priestess was great. ^_^

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/16/20 11:45 am Title: Blakemere

Those were interesting chapters,was the story for Cindy to make her feel better about herself or was it a warning to all to learn the magic so they could protect their group. Or was it to make them know not to take any shit from men who believe that they are better then females.

Author's Response: Primarily it was to answer the question of what happened to the Goddess's last group of followers. There were some hints in "Megan", where it was also revealed that She had slept for 6 centuries. Beyond that, yeah it was to show the importance of everyone learning magic. The bit about Cindy was honestly a surprise, I had no idea where the Goddess got the names from when she them to Cindy. lol. Thanks for reading & thanks for the review! :D

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