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Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/23/20 08:49 am Title: Training Incident

Awesome chapter , that’s a cliffhanger! Well written!

Author's Response: Thank you! Iím a bit nervous about having an exposition dump but I hope youíll be looking forward to have some questions answered!

Reviewer: wolfgaurd1 Signed Report
Date: 04/06/20 01:47 pm Title: The Rise

Good one shot but check some of the sentences, some of them seemed to not match very well.
Still a great story and you should make this a series.

Author's Response: I am tentatively working on a chapter 2 after the kind words people below have left! I don't know how long I will keep it running but I will keep it running as long as I have more ideas of where I want to go.

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/06/20 01:58 am Title: The Rise

Sweet story that asks for a continuation.

Reviewer: Rushica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/05/20 07:44 pm Title: The Rise

Very nice and cute story. It's fine as a short one shot, but you left yourself the perfect stepping point to move into a longer story. I hope you add to it even if it's just a chapter or two showing her learning her new life.

Reviewer: gothicshark Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/05/20 02:52 pm Title: The Rise

nice story, can work for the start of something longer as well.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/05/20 11:34 am Title: The Rise

A cute beginning, I hope there’s more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I currently donít have plans to continue but thereís a good chance Iíll revisit this story sometime in the near future!

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