Reviews For Seaglass
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Reviewer: YuunaMatsubara Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/18/20 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cute :)

Reviewer: Wispy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/18/20 08:38 am Title: Chapter 2

aww sweet little egg

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/16/20 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like how he is slowly changing, both in mind and body. Can't wait to see how this progresses.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/16/20 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wish I could come across a mermaid while walking along the beach. So far, no luck.
Great start to your story, but moving a little fast. Maybe slow down a bit and add some more details and descriptions.
Please keep writing.

Reviewer: YuunaMatsubara Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/15/20 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 2

Minor nitpick but should this really be classified as a "Curse" story? The word curse implies it's something negative and unwanted.

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