Date: 04/19/20 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1: The Too Young Couple
Interesting - I wondering where this is going.
Author's Response: Since I caught your interest, I'd say I managed to do something right. As for where this piece of work is heading, I did hint at it in the existing notes before starting up this story. I know that isn't much to go on and it takes quite the imagination to envision what the hell all that meant. What I vow to do is get what you need out there for all to read and, if you're willing, fix up the mistakes I make to ensure all of this makes as much sense as humanly possible. How come that sounded pessimistic? I have discovered drinking while writing works well together. I'm not held back by doubt on what I want to tell. Alcohol is great courage to get the job done, but I'm confident that my head isn't thinking of everything. I'm going to slip up on something. For now, seeing as I don't have anybody spot-checking on me yet, I'll keeping chugging us towards that finish line.
Date: 03/16/20 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Too Young Couple
Being a new parent is utterly brutal. You have captured it so well.
Whenever my teenagers get annoying, I assure them that they owe me EVERYTHING. Then they say "But why?" and I can respond with "Because exploding diapers."
Google it, it's real.
Author's Response: Goddammit! I caught "exploding diapers" the moment I sipped my Cola. Now my nose bubbles and burns.
Thank you for the five stars and the personal comment about what you've gone through (that one was a hilariously painful experience, but that was my fault). Also, I've seen a lot of your reviews, and I like what you had said about a few stories floating out there. I hope to hear more from you soon. Honestly, I like it when there is more commentary about what authors had done right or wrong. As long as we got thick skin, all reviews helps us produce better quality for all to enjoy. Good stuff.
More parental experiences will come up in the next chapter. Since I work this week, I'll have that chapter worked on and uploaded by next week.