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Reviewer: Day Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/23/20 01:35 am Title: Chapter 4

What a fabulous twist on an old and retold tale. OK so it was a bit difficult or raunchy at times, but that's OK, especially with the happy endings. Long but well-told chapters. You laid the foreshadowing but I didn't see the Jasmine transition until it happened. Thanks!

Reviewer: Tau Gamma Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/20/20 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was really cleverly done. Thank you for sharing it with us

Reviewer: optimizer Signed Report
Date: 03/16/20 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whatever talents I have, they don't extend to the visual arts. But I do sometimes like to have something to work from, to help visualization. An artist named Jirla Vinse Jonatan Väätäinen (http://www.jirkavinse.com/) has done a series of images of Disney characters as real people. Relevant to the story:

Aladdin: http://www.jirkavinse.com/img/disneyguys/Aladdin.jpg
Jasmine: http://www.jirkavinse.com/img/disney/jasmine1.jpg
Jafar: http://www.jirkavinse.com/img/disneyvillains/jafar.jpg

(This earlier version of Jasmine is not unlike how Alana is described in Imperator Mentus' original story, "Aladdin's Last Wish", including the outfit: http://www.jirkavinse.com/img/disney/jasmine2.jpg )

From another artist:
Jelveh: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/312226186643265143/


And as bad as I am at illustration, in music I'm even less talented. Making my story into a musical is far outside my capabilities. But there's this deleted Jafar song from the actual movie, "Humiliate The Boy": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W9vXZncjGvk

I suppose this song from a while ago might go with certain scenes, as well: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lFl_lzfZqzE

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