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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/22/20 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow, you have to wonder if that kind of stuff goes on in real life. At this point he is probably better off getting the final surgery. It doesn't look like he has anything to back to no matter what.

Excellent descriptions of the changes, and what is going through his mind.

Reviewer: SuperBob Signed Report
Date: 02/22/20 04:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Awesome thank you!

Reviewer: SuperBobFan Signed Report
Date: 02/20/20 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

I registered here just so I could review this story SuperBob. I really like it. Chapter four was the best yet. Please continue.

(I also very much like "The Pretty, Little Human Doll" and would love to see you continue that as well).


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