Date: 02/24/20 02:35 am Title: Lost, Found
I am torn; on one hand, Cindy/Scott was a rapist, and as far as I am concerned, rapists deserve no mercy. On the other hand, I can’t condone leaving a teen girl alone on the streets, where she will likely be raped herself. An interesting moral dilemma. Can’t wait for the next part of this series.
Date: 02/19/20 06:36 pm Title: Lost, Found
Just re-read the chapter for extra appreciation and to see if I missed anything, and I have to say I love how bratty Cindy is, very much like me, ehehe. x3 I love it. Also fml Henry at the end, shit. Also I am totally getting the vibe that the Goddess doesn't have the same moral compass as modern society, as it is / was largely shaped when she was still widely worshiped. It might change with time and their coven's influence but the whole not revoking her punishment to me clearly met up with like old time justice.
Date: 02/18/20 02:48 am Title: Dark, Dawn
Wow... I wonder why the goddess is keeping this secret from Nicole, Sam and Jess. Is it to protect their consciences, since they were opposed to changing reality, openly using magic or getting revenge with it. Or was she trying to avoid renewing Sam's guilt at transforming Nicole? And I wonder if the Goddess realised these circumstances + Nicole losing time, might cause them a lot of confusion, doubt and distrust?
I certainly don't think the Goddess is evil, but I am fully aware the justice of Gods is different to the justice of humans, often harsher.
All said I am interested to see where this goes.
Date: 02/17/20 07:39 pm Title: Dark, Dawn
Wow. Damn. This chapter after the last one, both so cathartic and yet...odd. Like, after seeing Scott Mathews turned into Cindy given the situation that she now finds herself in, part of me wishes for her to be saved. Like, I wanted Scott to get fucked up last chapter in retaliation but...I am very conflicted now. Shit. Damn. You are good at messing with my emotions, well done.
Date: 02/17/20 05:59 am Title: Family, Friends
He needs to be taught a lesson.
If he gets away with it once, he'll get away with it 1,000 times. A bully never does things once, been the object of too many bully's in my life to make me an expert and a rapist is the worst kind.
Date: 02/16/20 05:55 pm Title: Secrets, Pain
That was intense, but pretty well-handled. I would have preferred it if the two sections were in their own separate chapters, since they don't have much to do with each other and are both a lot to process on their own, but that's the consequence of having long chapters, I guess. I'm glad that the audience didn't have to see what happened. That was a good call on your part.
Author's Response: Thank you! I dunno why we kinda stuck on 7k words as a chapter length, I think it just kinda felt right at first & we stuck with it?
Date: 02/16/20 01:45 am Title: Family, Friends
Personally, I feel like she should have just turned him into a tapeworm or something; goodness knows the world would not miss yet another toxic, queer-phobic dudebro. But this does raise an interesting question: considering that so far it appears that this magic is vaguely Wiccan in nature, does this mean the ‘Rule of three’ is a thing in this universe?
Date: 02/15/20 11:31 pm Title: Family, Friends
I'm always happy to read more of your stories, the Witches of Welland series is a wonderful read. But the content warning on this one has me decidedly concerned. I trust you though. I trust you to not just do it as cheap shock, but it really use it for character development, and to have the perpetrator face consequences.