Date: 02/14/20 04:34 pm Title: Chapter One: The Terrible Town
The narration here is A+. Sensible-Chuckle laugh worthy at quite a few points. Also, some very good descriptions, particularly the chocolate cake and the depression.
Chib is an unusual but nicely not very gendered nickname from Archibald. But who knows if anyone would agree to use it. :(
Date: 02/14/20 12:53 am Title: Chapter One: The Terrible Town
A very interesting beginning; the conversational writing style reminds me of A Series of Unfortunate Events, by Lemony Snicket, and is certainly a refreshing change of pace from this website’s usual fare.