Reviews For Siren Song
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Reviewer: AlexaTiresias Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/17/20 02:19 am Title: Chapter Two: 'Arr' and Other Nautical Terms

The more I read this story, the more I realize I absolutely adore the writing of this story; amazing work!

Reviewer: Firebate Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/14/20 08:41 pm Title: Chapter One: The Terrible Town

An interesting start for sure. A cute gotcha at the end. The prose reminds me of Douglas Adams' Hitchhicker's Guide to the Galaxy'.

Reviewer: Foundling_Fae Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/14/20 04:34 pm Title: Chapter One: The Terrible Town

The narration here is A+. Sensible-Chuckle laugh worthy at quite a few points. Also, some very good descriptions, particularly the chocolate cake and the depression.

Chib is an unusual but nicely not very gendered nickname from Archibald. But who knows if anyone would agree to use it. :(

Reviewer: AlexaTiresias Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/14/20 12:53 am Title: Chapter One: The Terrible Town

A very interesting beginning; the conversational writing style reminds me of A Series of Unfortunate Events, by Lemony Snicket, and is certainly a refreshing change of pace from this website’s usual fare.

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