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Reviewer: JadaLove Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/25/20 04:40 pm Title: Lust at First Sight

I'm really looking forward to the next part of this story. I love body swap stories and I love where this one is potentially leading. Please do hurry back with the next installment.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/12/20 03:47 am Title: Lust at First Sight

Great start, now it's time to start taking deeper dives into each plot point - the old woman on the corner, Jared's wish (if any), etc. Of course, we need to see Jared and Sammi's reaction to whatever magic took place while they slept. Go for it, you've sketched your canvas, now start filling it in.

Reviewer: IreneGamerGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/11/20 06:43 pm Title: Lust at First Sight

Hey, I like the story so far. I am not a writer myself but the best tip I can give right now, is that you add some space between every paragraph.(sorry for the bad english, its my second language).

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