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Reviewer: Lunatastic Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/06/20 09:26 pm Title: Becoming Mrs. Darcy

I quite enjoyed the story. The only thing bugging me is, how was the house able to affect outside of it? Like, why turn Josh into Mrs.Darcy and resurrect the baby, but then also create another Josh? Why not resurrect Mrs.Darcy instead? Or, is the house just changing a bunch of people into other people? I'm sorry, I think about things too much at times.

Still 5 stars =)

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/04/20 07:55 pm Title: Becoming Mrs. Darcy

Great story. I liked Josh's transformation.
Does the new Mrs Darcy remember anything about being Josh? Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Hi there, thanks for reading! I believe Josh's mind is buried deep in there while reduced to a vague feeling. If you refer to Mrs. Darcy's tears at the end then that's certainly Josh emoting from the deep recesses of her mind, but she can never understand what it means. She IS Mrs. Darcy now.

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