Reviews For Transpire
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Reviewer: AlexaTiresias Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/09/20 04:30 am Title: Chapter 5: Fabula Ultimum

I really liked the ending. A very melancholy, but also very beautiful story. Your writing is excellent.

Reviewer: Maria Esperanza Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/07/20 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: Colloquium Cum Draconi

This story was a delight. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: PurpleCatGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/07/20 11:29 am Title: Chapter 5: Fabula Ultimum

Aww this was a fun read, cute story. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Foundling_Fae Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/07/20 07:02 am Title: Chapter 5: Fabula Ultimum

Your development of the vampire myth is good, making a believable environment for this story of heartbreaking understandability. I think Katherine is going to have an interesting time of things from here on. :)

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/07/20 06:53 am Title: Chapter 5: Fabula Ultimum

Very nice development! Sweet and simple. And it fits the Grand Inquisitor was a black magician!

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/05/20 05:54 am Title: Chapter 3: Homo Non Sum

“I know,” she said. “We’ve always known, dear.”

Good to see a story with supportive parents. As a parent of a "difficult" child, I assure you that the vast majority of parents are willing to move Heaven and Earth to make their kids happy.

Reviewer: Saklad Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/05/20 03:12 am Title: Chapter 3: Homo Non Sum

I only just realized the title "Transpire" is also "Trans Vampire". And "Transylvania", of course.

Reviewer: Morrigan Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/04/20 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1: Colloquium Cum Draconi

ooooh exciting. cant wait 2 see what sort of bad things this vampire gets up to

Reviewer: Maria Esperanza Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/04/20 03:46 am Title: Chapter 1: Colloquium Cum Draconi

By her!

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/04/20 01:36 am Title: Chapter 1: Colloquium Cum Draconi

I really dig this! I can just see an escape happening in the future too... Soo exciting!

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