Date: 02/17/20 05:30 am Title: Chapter 3: Lena
I'm glad Alex's sister is so understanding. He needs someone like that right now. And I really don't think Molly did anything wrong. She was only trying to help Alex to not lose his night's pay. And even the Chef approved of their solution.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I agree Molly didn't really do anything wrong, she was just trying to help. And Alex didn't complain about it too much while it was being done. But Lena sees things differently ;)
Date: 02/17/20 04:52 am Title: Chapter 1: Xander
I LOVE this so far!! I did notice though, the tag says female to male. Is that right? I can't wait to see future chapters!
Author's Response: Oh dear, I'm sorry. I'm afraid the tag was a mistake on my part, apparently I've misclicked when first submitting the story. I have corrected it now. Sorry for the trouble (and sorry if I got your hopes up).
Date: 02/01/20 07:18 am Title: Chapter 1: Xander
Very good balance between the egg and normal lifeishness. I was totally going to be questioning his total lack of real complaint about her treatment of him, but you definitely made it explicable in that last handful of sentences.