Date: 06/06/20 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: Xander
Thank you for this wonderful story. Lexi is a fantastic person and you have drawn her with such depth of character that she feels like a friend. I shall miss her and Roger's exploits, and thank you so much for giving then the happy ever after that they thoroughly deserve!
Date: 05/31/20 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: Xander
Thanks Zoe. It’s been a long, exciting and in the end very satisfying ride. It’s also coincided with my own equally lengthy and arduous battle with coronavirus, which isn’t over yet, so following your story along with others has provided a lot of solace. Thank you.
I also note that you’re transitioning and would like to wish you every possible success. d84;a039;
Date: 05/30/20 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue
NOOOOEEESS! IT CANT BE OVERRRRR!!!
Oh well, an absolutely wonderful story! ^_^ I loved it from the first chapter, I'd 10/10 it but will have to suffice for 5/5 stars. ^^
Thank you for writing this wonderful little story, its been a blast to read, and I look forward to your further works. ^_^
Date: 05/30/20 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue
Phenomenal story. Definitely one of the best I've ever had the pleasure of reading, and I definitely didn't expect to find myself more on the edge of my seat for this one, as opposed to your superhero story. Great job!
Date: 05/25/20 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 14 (previous version): Charlie
Uggg.... This happened to me at a goth party back twenty years ago. Fortunately, I was rescued, but the perp managed to put a hole in my tights. Fortunately, I was wearing a gaff, panties, and two layers of tights, so they didn't gain access. But that taught me a lesson about accepting drinks.
((Note: two layers of tights to create strange visual looks, I use to do red under thin black to create a smoky black color. Also causes a visual effect due to crisscrossing threads)
Date: 05/21/20 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 12: Maddy
Gah, snuck up on me, I didn't realize this was the last posted chapter! I have so thoroughly been enjoying this story, I can't wait to read more of Lexi's story. I'm really curious to see who Lexi ends up being in a relationship with, Roger or Molly would be my guess. Thank you for such a wonderful story, now it is time to read your other stories - while I wait for this one's next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm glad you've enjoyed my story so far. And also, you're in luck, since I've just posted a new chapter :)
Date: 05/21/20 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 5: Molly
I am so thoroughly enjoying this story and ecstatic to find a currently running series, so many of the series here have been abandoned or finished long ago. I love the characters and the story line, you have a nice gift for dialogue.
Date: 05/07/20 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 11: Mom and Dad
This is a sweet chapter!
My mom reacted *very* similarly when I came out--while she hadn't suspected it previously, her first words were literally "Oh, really? That's interesting. Tell me more."
It kind of threw me for a loop because that degree of casualness was the one response I *wasn't* prepared :-D
Author's Response: Ah, that's so sweet! I'm glad for you :)
Date: 05/07/20 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 11: Mom and Dad
If only my parents were that cool. Also is it to soon to make a ship? Because I feel one approaching.
Author's Response: By all means, go ahead. I of course (being the author) already know who's going to end up with whom, but I'm certainly not going to stop my readers from speculating and cheering specific ships on! :)
Date: 02/17/20 05:30 am Title: Chapter 3: Lena
I'm glad Alex's sister is so understanding. He needs someone like that right now. And I really don't think Molly did anything wrong. She was only trying to help Alex to not lose his night's pay. And even the Chef approved of their solution.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I agree Molly didn't really do anything wrong, she was just trying to help. And Alex didn't complain about it too much while it was being done. But Lena sees things differently ;)
Date: 02/17/20 04:52 am Title: Chapter 1: Xander
I LOVE this so far!! I did notice though, the tag says female to male. Is that right? I can't wait to see future chapters!
Author's Response: Oh dear, I'm sorry. I'm afraid the tag was a mistake on my part, apparently I've misclicked when first submitting the story. I have corrected it now. Sorry for the trouble (and sorry if I got your hopes up).
Date: 02/01/20 07:18 am Title: Chapter 1: Xander
Very good balance between the egg and normal lifeishness. I was totally going to be questioning his total lack of real complaint about her treatment of him, but you definitely made it explicable in that last handful of sentences.