Date: 12/12/13 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story. Instead of rushing "in medias res," so to speak, you convincingly explore the transgender man's early life, including his grieving for a friend, begetting a family, and so on. This background made me feel glad for him when his dearest wish was magically granted. By the way, the story does not require the rating "explicit." "Adult" seems more appropriate. Thank you for a most enjoyable read.