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Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/22/20 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1

This has me intrigued, the murals and everything? What do they mean, and what is going to go on?

Reviewer: Foundling_Fae Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/07/20 07:32 am Title: Chapter 3

This is an interesting start to a portal fantasy. Devi has got herself into a definitely awkward spot.
Your world has some nicely explored linguistics going on, much better than some portal fantasies I could name. It is probably going to not explore it much further, but what you have done is quite appreciated. :)

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/07/20 02:24 am Title: Chapter 3

"That must be the worst portal ever!”

Heh, this story is insanely cute and sweet. I'm enjoying it immensely. Not enough kid-friendly stories around here. Thank you for sharing your art with us.

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