Date: 04/23/20 05:42 pm Title: ISSUE NINE: That Which We Call A Rose
Such a sweet ending! I love it when good triumphs over evil and love triumphs over hate!
Author's Response: It's nice, isn't it? I couldn't think of a better way to end it. Thank you for reading!
Date: 04/23/20 05:13 pm Title: ISSUE NINE: That Which We Call A Rose
This was... phenomenal! I’ve been following this story since the beginning and this was a good story. I loved the characters and plot and the action. Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading it! :)
Date: 04/20/20 01:55 am Title: ISSUE THREE: Montana
For the record, while I've only ever driven to Bozeman, I'm fairly certain it has reasonably sized airport--or, at the very least, when I was there for a conference at Montana State, a lot of people were able to fly in for it without too much trouble.
Author's Response: You're right :) The purpose of that passage was to establish Antonia's fear of flying (and a couple other things), which will come up in future chapters again. Thanks for the clarification!
Date: 04/19/20 11:51 pm Title: ISSUE SEVEN: Heroes and Villains
I love this story but Ross Kyle isn't Claire's name so why is he able to control her? That might've been her name once but that's no longer her name.
Author's Response: I won't go into details right now as it would reveal something I intend to keep under wraps until future chapters. Just trust me when I say that your question will be answered in due time :)
Date: 04/19/20 05:34 pm Title: ISSUE SEVEN: Heroes and Villains
Ooh! Plot twist! I didn't think that the twist at the end of last chapter could be topped, but you managed it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I hope you will like the following chapters, too!
Date: 04/19/20 04:17 pm Title: ISSUE SEVEN: Heroes and Villains
I'm amazed that this story hasn't gotten more reads. It's really good, and you just amped up the tension masterfully there at the end of the chapter. I am really anxious to know how this resolves.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really enjoying writing this story, and I love hearing that readers like it :)
Date: 04/11/20 11:40 am Title: ISSUE SIX: Truth
Nice cliff hanger, only her last sentence seems wrong to me, I think past tense would sound better.
From: “It’s me,” she said. “I am Ross Kyle. I am PowerJack.”
To “It’s me,” she said. “I was Ross Kyle. I was PowerJack.”
Reasoning Claire no matter her gender identity she seems to be Trans or something like that, and she basically killed off the Ross Kyle/PowerJack identity.
Real world example, My name is Rachel the Gothic Shark, I am Trans, I was Born (Dead-name) and now I am Rachel. ... p,s, if Claire is Trans, than her dead name is just that emotionally. Few Trans people will call them selves I am (dead-name) it's kind of too painful for us.
Author's Response: Don't I know it :) Without spoiling anything, I'll just say that in the next chapter the "identity" theme will be quite prominent, and there's a reason why I had Claire phrase that sentence the way I did. Look forward to it!