Date: 02/03/20 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 8: Friendly Fire
That was so cute, I loved the scene with the kisses and her putting out her fire. Just a face mask? Is that really going to work? I mean longer hair, completely different body shape, she'd be better off saying Damien died or went away and now she was a cousin staying with the family. Humans are silly and will believe almost anything, if it'll keep thinking about the supernatural or illogical
Date: 02/03/20 03:46 am Title: Chapter 10: Union and Reunion
This story was so adorable and funny and gay and wholesome. I was grinning like a maniac the entire time I was reading it! The idea that hell was cancelled is brilliant, and it really gives the story a whole different feel compared to other stories involving heaven and hell. I hope you write more stories!
Date: 02/03/20 02:25 am Title: Chapter 1: Time Out
Really liked this. Very cute and fun to read. I'm a little sad to see it finished now mostly because the ending felt kind of rushed. I've read several of your other stories to and am enjoying them as well. Thanks for your time and sharing these with us.
Date: 02/02/20 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 10: Union and Reunion
I said I wanted a good conclusion? You've totally delivered. This story is wonderfully cuddly and good. And the final chapter has a big pile of fun twist on that classic trope. It maybe isn't theologically sound, but the trope is already super questionable so I am not complaining.
This is a great story. Maybe one of the top ten I've seen on here? You should feel proud of it! :)
Author's Response: Aaaa thank you!!! TTwTT
Date: 02/01/20 07:10 am Title: Chapter 5: Taken In Vain
Some very cool ideas mixed with some really cute and relatable character development. And at such a speed! How are you writing this so fast? Slow down and make sure you don't burn out on it! Or don't if you feel that confident, I guess. But I want to see this come to a good conclusion? :)