Date: 01/28/20 02:35 pm Title: Ritual & Reward
A very cute story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It was also an interesting concept, and I would love to see a possible continuation of the story, such as someone finding out what they were doing, or someone trying to oppose the goddess, if you want to. Again, lovely story.
Date: 01/27/20 12:27 pm Title: Chick Flick
Great story. Loved every minute of reading it. If it strikes your fancy I could see and would love to read about Nikki and Sam's work for the Goddess in the world. Could make for an Interesting light story or more. Even a series of one shots would be fun to read.
Date: 01/27/20 09:42 am Title: Ritual & Reward
That was very cute! Another ending I’d envisioned was the ritual not being able to be completed, Nikki turning back, but with their helping of new experiences and empathy, Nick would’ve later transitioned the old fashioned way back to Nikki. But magically helping queer kids is nice too :p One thing I’m definitely happy is that Nikki 100% remembers her time as Nick. It’s a good detail that avoids unfortunate cis dude to cis lady implications - cis dude to trans lady is just a hundred times more interesting. Looking forward to future stories of yours!
Date: 01/27/20 05:10 am Title: Choices & Consequences
Wow! This reminds me a lot of Pull of Divinity, in a good way! I can’t help but feel like your username is a hint to the odd body issues Nikki is having, heheh :p I see chapter 4 is stuck in validation limbo right now, I’ll read it as soon as it’s available!
Date: 01/25/20 03:05 pm Title: Choices & Consequences
Wow, this is going in unexpected directions. I bounced off of it at first, not being in the mood for another "punshed by turning into a girl" story, but some people recommended it and I took a closer look, and I'm glad I did.
There are a few typos, mostly unnecessary or missing commas, but the characterization is top-notch and the plot, as I said, is twisty and unexpected. Brava!
Date: 01/23/20 06:24 am Title: Just Desserts
Another excellent chapter! The catalyst for the change makes sense, as does the rational for Nikki not changing back. I just hope Nikki doesn’t lose her past memories. If she remembers who she was, she could use that as a way to grow. But regardless I’m in for the rest of the ride, no matter where it goes. Can’t wait for chapter 3!
Date: 01/23/20 05:03 am Title: Just Desserts
I am an absolute, total sucker for stories of assholes getting their gender changed and everybody is feeling awkward and split between letting the asshole come back or just acknowledging the situation is better than before. The drama! The character growth!
Date: 01/22/20 03:32 am Title: Chick Flick
Very well written story. I loved the description of the change, the mental change, and how reality was rewritten to accommodate the new Nikki. I especially liked the touch of her being lesbian, and her old memories fading. What I didn't like so much is I didn't relate much to Nick. I'm not much into transformation as a punishment, because I want to experience transformation myself. As far as that goes though, I would love to become Nikki.
Date: 01/21/20 09:45 am Title: Chick Flick
Overall, I thought it was pretty well done. The pacing was pretty good to be a one-off story or something to elaborate on, and the memory changing was handled pretty well. My only issue is pretty minor; Nick's dialogue in his head at the very start seemed very different than it was later. I get he might have been angry the second time, but it was like two different people entirely. In the end this is just a minor issue and this is all just my opinion. Overall it was pretty solid.