Date: 02/12/20 05:48 pm Title: Fudge
I can relate to Jay's nervousness. It was so easy to picture myself in pre-date terror. And now he is inside Allison's body sharing it with her. No reason to be nervous anymore hahaha.
I really liked the humor associated with each pet when discussing Jay's new body options.
Great job on the story, just be sure to take your time and let the reader get a really good mental picture of what each of the characters is going through. Thank you.