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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/12/20 05:48 pm Title: Fudge

I can relate to Jay's nervousness. It was so easy to picture myself in pre-date terror. And now he is inside Allison's body sharing it with her. No reason to be nervous anymore hahaha.

I really liked the humor associated with each pet when discussing Jay's new body options.

Great job on the story, just be sure to take your time and let the reader get a really good mental picture of what each of the characters is going through. Thank you.

Reviewer: whoos Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/21/20 02:37 am Title: Fudge

i love the voice you've given the narrator, very excited to see where this goes

Reviewer: Trismegistus Shandy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/19/20 02:29 am Title: Fudge

This was delightfully funny. Thank you.

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