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Reviewer: ninaanderson Signed starstar Report
Date: 01/19/20 06:22 am Title: Chapter 1

The story went on without anything that really kept my enthusiasm. The beginning was to slow and hard to grasp the premise.

Reviewer: Rushica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/18/20 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1

I'd honestly like to see another chapter for this. It's great as a standalone, but I'm curious what you'd do with the three of them from here.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/17/20 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent storyline, I enjoyed the read. Well done

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