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Reviewer: Day Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/12/20 03:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Ohmigod what an excellent story -- and I'm saying that after reading only the first of two chapters -- waiting to savor the second when I'm ready. I'm loving everything about it -- the premise, the transition, the backstory, the {thoughts}, the dialog, the upbeat path (at least so far), and the way you explore through a lot of angles without cutting corners and forcing me to fill in the what-ifs with my imagination.

This was so great, I hit the author name to see what else you'd written, and found only one other here, the indescribably delicious Inescapable you just posted recently. Damn you're good!

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