Date: 01/12/20 03:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic! Thoroughly enjoyable (even though I tend to skim over the explicitly squicky parts, not my fetish), so well written and creative, fabulous world-building with the rules and the storylines all neatly fleshed out and brought to conclusion. -- Although I still hope you'll honor us with a sequel! In particular, if Gerry's gotta DIE before someone can succeed him, what a shame, maybe you can find a loophole? Loving your characters so much, I want to visit with them more as they continue their lives, especially Richard/Marci, Anong, Gerry, Ben...
I'm wondering why not more reviews already. My guess is that it's because you posted some very long chapters, and the whole story at once. Fine with me, but you might consider more, shorter, chapters, and pumping them out over time, if you care to bother.
This is one of those rare stories I'm going to remember and reread after some months pass.
Date: 01/08/20 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1
The concept of magically having your mind tweaked to desire mens’ lust is a delicious and elegant invention, and I thank you for introducing it into my fantasies.
I’ve long been bound by a yearning to become what I desire, and this is an extra layer that compliments that. Thank you.