Date: 01/03/20 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a sweet little story! I enjoyed reading it.
Also, in case you weren't already aware: if you desire to be a girl, you *can* just be a girl. Speaking from experience, it's entirely doable!
Author's Response: I am glad to hear you liked it. I am, at this point, aware. I have some fairly eggy stories around somewhere, but I've hatched. :) family isn't letting me be me of course. But that is a different issue.
Date: 01/02/20 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mostly the translation is kind of broken english. Kind of like it was done as a direct word for word translation which oftentimes comes out a bit weird. The story is still understandable and easy to follow though so it isn't a major determinant or anything. As far as any continuation, if you choose to, I could see this as a day in the life story where they learn to adjust to their new life and the impacts it has on their relationships. It wouldn't have to be anything that turns into a life and death thing. It could easily remain light hearted. That said it's still a fine standalone short story.
Date: 01/02/20 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Still needs a little work on the translation, but it's still easy enough to read. Very nice and cute story. I could see this becoming a multi chapter story if you have the desire to continue it. I would certainly enjoy reading more. Thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response: Hmm. It definitely wasn't intended to continue. I am really not certain how I would continue it, though I will consider how I might. What problems do you see with the translation? If there is anything I am aware of, or surrounds dialogue: in the original, each character has their own quote marks, which really doesn't work in English. I did try to add tags frequently enough. Thank you for the feedback!
Date: 01/02/20 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Was expecting a TF into a dragon too but oh well, still a nice story :)
Author's Response: Yeah, my stories tend to be more dream-fulfilling than that. I don't have a strong desire to be a dragon, myself. I hope you weren't too disappointed, and thanks for dropping the review!