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Reviewer: evenrude Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/21/20 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

good story. The complex time jumping makes it a little hard to follow when the chapters arrive sporadically. Detail is good.

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you like it. I try to post a new chapter every fourth day.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/20/20 11:23 am Title: Chapter 6

I feel like your chapters are getting shorter and shorter,I’m really getting into the storyline. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you. For as long as I've been writing, I just don't seem to have mastered writing uniform length chapters. I try, but.....

Reviewer: Day Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/12/20 03:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Yup, what they already said. Great start, fore(post?)shadowing, eager to see how you present the (apparent) transition, given that Audry took off. (And what a sad reason! Methinks Leo should have offered to help her cross paths with and off her stalker!)

Author's Response: Glad you like it. Much more to come.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/11/20 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 4

I’m surprised no one else is not leaving a review. I hope the changes start in the next chapter. Very well written.

Author's Response: I think there are 2 reasons. First, there seems to be a larger volume of stories posted lately, and I have not been announcing new chapters in the reviewers club. I gu+

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/31/19 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

A different start for you, starting two years from the beginning, but I love the storyline already

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/31/19 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Great introduction. I'm hooked for the duration.

Author's Response: Hope I can keep you hooked.

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