Date: 01/20/20 11:23 am Title: Chapter 6
I feel like your chapters are getting shorter and shorter,I’m really getting into the storyline. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you. For as long as I've been writing, I just don't seem to have mastered writing uniform length chapters. I try, but.....
Date: 01/12/20 03:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Yup, what they already said. Great start, fore(post?)shadowing, eager to see how you present the (apparent) transition, given that Audry took off. (And what a sad reason! Methinks Leo should have offered to help her cross paths with and off her stalker!)
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Much more to come.
Date: 01/11/20 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
I’m surprised no one else is not leaving a review. I hope the changes start in the next chapter. Very well written.
Author's Response: I think there are 2 reasons. First, there seems to be a larger volume of stories posted lately, and I have not been announcing new chapters in the reviewers club. I gu+