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Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/13/14 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

loved this story.

Reviewer: Snarfles Signed Report
Date: 05/02/13 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Review this piece? Are you kidding? Stop composing in the submission box, use a word processor and copy paste the finished work. Stop depending on spell check to correct your word choices, the spelling might be correct, but you use the wrong word so many times.... THROUGH not threw.... Learn the rules of punctuation. I've read every piece you've posted, hoping for improvement in the technical aspects, and been disappointed. Do you proofread at all? You can do much better.

Reviewer: JillMicayla Signed starstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 11/29/12 10:38 am Title: Chapter 1

Make your stories a bit longer give the reader a tingle for the imagination

Reviewer: angelcs Signed starstar Report
Date: 10/23/12 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

More sounds Good to me

Reviewer: junyour Signed starstarhalf-star Report
Date: 10/15/12 08:57 am Title: Chapter 1

I am not usually a reader of sissy stories, but I would like to ask you to continue.
This one has my attention and I would like to see where it goes.

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/14/12 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Don't leave us hanging, please

Reviewer: SissyBlondeBimboSlut88 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/14/12 02:32 am Title: Chapter 1

i would love to se more

Reviewer: Baby_Girl_69ing Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/14/12 12:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Was very fun reading but you have to continue this story. I really enjoy all your stories. Thank you for sharing.

Baby Girl

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