Date: 06/26/20 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 16 - On days like these, folks like you… should be burning in hell
ok so im not even halfway through but i need to leave a review, cuz this story is so much fun
usually i just come to this site when i need an escape cuz irl shit and dysphoria suck a lot, so most of the stories i read are just like... quick n easy transition stuff, wish fulfillment, etc., and any actual narrative that isn't really based around that tends to fade into the background for me
but this story - oh ho ho - i love this. a fun premise, an adorable and relatable mc, a great cast, plenty of world-building without it distracting from the flow of things, and i love that it's set in the future so like... a lot of the irl bullshit we deal with is kind of assumed to have been moved past, for the most part. it's really refreshing, and im just loving this story a lot. thank you for writing it.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it!
Date: 05/26/20 01:10 am Title: Epilogue - Palette Town
Thanks for the whole dang thing (grin). It was a fun read, a complex tale, which being posted serially meant I got a little lost at times and had to backtrack for a reminder. But that's OK, you wove quite a story arc there. Yeah I agree, you've got a beginning, a middle, and an end, without much left hanging loose. Other than how long until Lily gets close with someone? Leo? Why not? But that's OK too, leave it to our imaginations.
Author's Response: Why does everyone ship the lesbian with the gay furry dude?!?!?!
Date: 03/23/20 01:41 am Title: Interlude 7 - Teenagers
What a crazy ongoing story! It's morphed WAY beyond what I would have guessed at first. Enough to lose track sometimes, but a bit of back-revisiting brings me up to speed and then I enjoy the next chapter. Wondering where you're gonna go with it next!
Date: 03/08/20 11:38 pm Title: Interlude 4 - Want You Gone
This story is pretty cool. I feel like lily has wobbled a bit on the path to self acceptance, but I guess I have too. Your mythology is cool, and you've been giving us a tour without going too far into the problem of "lookit!" which can so easily derail a story like this. I am going to keep on reading, I just wanted to say "how much longer can lily keep doing this to herself?!" you have done good so far.
Author's Response: 17 chapters and 4 interludes is the answer to that last question. Thanks for reading!
Date: 01/28/20 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Ghost
Really enjoyed the plural rep in this chapter & the previous! I hope it doesn't really take till 2089 tho before systems can be more out there in public. Also we'd love one of those charms to make it more obvious when we've switched, lol.
Author's Response: Me too, especially since I'm dating two systems, am but a singlet myself though. And thank you! I didn't leave a review yet but I really enjoyed Nikki!
Date: 01/14/20 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Mad World
I'm loving Deviled Egg. It's awesome and you're awesome. Please write more! 8-)
Author's Response: I am! I'm catching TGStorytime slowly up to Scribblehub, and patrons get to read the chapters as they get written.
Date: 01/12/20 04:03 am Title: Chapter 17 - Eye of the House Cat
At first I was merely amused, and sometimes confused, especially as more chapters appeared. (Short is fine with me, no complaints there.) Eventually I got curious enough to bounce back to the beginning and read/skim forward again -- even more enjoyable than the first time -- the story is rich and well-enough told that I understood it better, and suddenly a lot of the Easter eggs (sorry) hidden in plain sight were paying off.
Loving the way you imagined the magic and its rules. Loving how Lily slowly breaks out of her shell... Wouldn't mind a little more self-exploratory smut! Lots and lots of quirky humor, including the chapter titles. Thanks!
Date: 01/02/20 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 16 - On days like these, folks like you… should be burning in hell
I really like this story its great... but the upload speed just isn't enough for me. If you keep going the way you are now....
you're gonna have a bad time.
Date: 01/01/20 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 16 - On days like these, folks like you… should be burning in hell
I'm really really enjoying this story! I love Lily and what's going on and Bournie reminds me of a plague doctor mixed with the big raven from Dark Souls... This story is damn cool.
Date: 12/17/19 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Dabadee Dabadai
I am really enjoying this story! I hope Lily realizes more about herself soon - and that fight with Victor where she was screaming and letting it all out as she pounded him to a pulp... wow - very emotional. I can't wait to read more.