Date: 12/09/19 06:26 pm Title: The Program
This was cute! Maybe later we find out what happened to the other lucky beta-testers? Does their reality get adjusted too? What if it's the soulmate who's perfect as-is, and the user has to be altered to fit her needs?
Author's Response: Unfortunately, I never decided to chronicle what may have happened with the other testers. It may forever be up in the air.
Date: 12/08/19 04:58 pm Title: The Program
Great story would almost like to see more cause it was so great. One thing is you should correct the tag since it's set to female to male.
Author's Response: Well, whoops. Turns out this wasn't the only story I mistagged. Thanks for making me look.
Date: 12/08/19 03:18 am Title: Truth
Excellent story. You took what I was expecting to be a fun little boy-girl sex romp and made it into a much deeper love story. Exactly what defines the term 'soulmate'. I love happy endings, but you kept up the suspense until the very end. Great writing!
Date: 12/07/19 04:29 pm Title: The Program
Good concept, keep up the good work.
One edit to make:
“Is she trying to get you and I together?” Charlie asked
“Is she trying to get you and me together?” Charlie asked
The verb "get" is transitive, so it takes object pronouns, like me, thee, him, her, it, us, you, them. Like prepositions, transitive verbs take object pronouns.
Date: 12/06/19 05:01 am Title: The Program
Great start to your story. That's a change mechanism I haven't really seen before, combining magic with science. I love happy endings so I'm really looking forward to how their relationship progresses. Thanks for writing this story.