Date: 12/27/19 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 9: Horde
Excellent story so far. I loved the battle at the gate. I also like the attention paid to getting loot. Goblins probably don't have much loot, but when you stack up 1,000 of them, it probably comes to quite the sum. I'm sure everyone will be able to splurge on new outfits and gear next chapter.
Author's Response: The splurge episode won't follow that soon. But there will be one eventually :)
Date: 12/27/19 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 3: Renaissance
Ch 3 - I'm really liking this main character. The graveside scene with 'Granny' was very sweet. Although I have my doubts about her being anything as simple a just some old Granny. I suppose we'll find out as we move forward...
Date: 12/16/19 08:19 am Title: Chapter 7: Nightmare
This is a delightful story. Trans people figuring it out through vr games are so relaxing to read! Amicia's learning journey is being particularly great from this set of stories. You have placed some particularly enticing hooks for future developments, too.
If there is anything awkward about the story so far, it is definitely '... lise' s name. The ellipsis is confusing, particularly when the rest of her name seems perfectly ordinary? But, that is an acceptable oddity; I am looking forward to seeing what happens next in amicia's life.
Author's Response: It should be Elise but with the accent aigu, but this site doesn't convert that automatically