Date: 12/09/19 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a fun story. I've really enjoyed both of your stories so far, and I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouragement, I appreciate you taking the time to let me know you like them. I have a new story uploaded now, I hope you enjoy that one too.
Date: 12/06/19 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1
I wish the transformation was more detailed, felt kinda rushed. In the end it felt like both were kinda assholes.
Author's Response: I must admit I'm not quite comfortable yet putting detail into the transformations - I don't want them to come out sounding too clinical. But yeah, Tori is a total b**** really. All in all, I think Simone had the better evening :P
Date: 12/05/19 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really well written and very hot, excellent work on the transformation and the bedroom scene. Tori is both a terrible person and a total hypocrite and I'm hoping we see her in some future works.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :). I really got a kick out of writing that sex scene, it's a lot more erotic than most I've written but I feel like it came out well. So glad to see that you enjoyed it too. I'm thinking about maybe doing some more stories with Tori baiting people - she's such a b****.
Date: 12/05/19 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very hot stuff. You described that transformation, both physical and mental, beautifully.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. It's always a real challenge to decide on how much to put into the transformations, and how to 'flick the switch' so to speak regarding how the POV character views themselves. I'm so pleased that you found that it worked in this one.