Reviews For Deep Magicks
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Reviewer: Day Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/21/19 04:34 am Title: CH. 5

It took me a while to open this story, TGS has been busy lately (and me too), but then I found myself eager to get through all the chapters posted so far, plus rereading parts. It's entertaining and fast-paced, enough that I get a little lost at times, but that's OK, better than dragging along. Really enjoying the MTF self-discovery descriptions.

Parents' reactions are a bit harder to believe, but I guess they know magic exists, so in a world like that, people aren't so surprised? Also why weren't they upset about black blood being found throughout the house? (Early in the story, did I miss something?) The fictional multi-world is great, well-enough presented and explained.

Didn't expect contracts with summoned entities to go so well though -- at least so far -- very cheery and fun to read, no nastiness. Giving up life force sounded risky, but apparently you can grow it back with a big breakfast (grin). What do the "demons" get out of the deal, though? Other than sustenance, just some entertaining variety?

I'm enjoying the first-person snarks, quirks, and idiomatic references, even if I don't get all of them. Keep it up.

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/20/19 12:09 am Title: CH. 1

Interesting start. Let's see where it goes. I would think people would be a lot more freaked out, though.

Author's Response: Most people are, Chris was sort of a self insert in this story. I respond to crises and the like with a sort of calm detachment. I have no idea why, it's just what I do. I crashed a car into a muddy corn field at one point and the most worked up I got was me, deadpan saying out loud to the screaming driving instructor next to me, "here we go."

I deleted this and re-posted it because I'm concerned that a non-rated comment might be computed by the website as a zero-rated comment. Which would be completely erroneous and unfair to the author.

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/19/19 11:58 pm Title: CH. 4

"She turned around and scanned the area for Gregory, who she promptly picked up by the neck, and she began choking him Bart Simpson style."

Moms are awesome. They're always on your side, no matter what.

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/19/19 03:13 pm Title: CH. 2

I love the intricacy of this story, which you spice up with a lot of tongue-in-cheek humor. So instead of being dry and boring, the world-building is actually quite fun.

Reviewer: Chloe_bear3 Signed Report
Date: 12/19/19 08:05 am Title: CH. 1

Yess the jojo reference is 10/10

Reviewer: Fiona Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/27/19 04:56 pm Title: CH. 1

*peeks* Very curious! Personally I hope he turns into a mermaid :3

Reviewer: SugarCube Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/22/19 01:34 pm Title: CH. 1

Weird and interesting start, I’m excited to see more of this!

Author's Response: It's meant to be a little surreal, yeah. I'm editing chapter two for posting right now :)

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/22/19 11:41 am Title: CH. 1

Interesting start,very detailed, and written well.

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the compliments ^-^

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