Reviews For Lucy’s return
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Reviewer: QModo Signed Report
Date: 11/21/19 08:21 am Title: Lucy’s return

Thanks for the comment Kirri.
In other stories of that universe (Door in the mirror) I include the outcome of the key person but in this story Bob and Lucy are so different that there is no way for Lucy to get to know about Bob. Most probably Bob had some kind of heart condition because of his parents' straightening him (maybe with DHT shots).

Reviewer: Kirri Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/20/19 11:39 pm Title: Lucy’s return

Nice short story and a pretty satisfactory ending as well, If you feel the need QModo there is certainly scope for a sequel, Perhaps by expanding on Lucy's return to school or maybe the mystery of how she finished up where Bob found her. Would also be nice if we found out if Bob survived in any way.... Sometimes though things like that are best left to the imagination,Ultimately though the choice is yours, Either way i certainly enjoyed the read...

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