Date: 11/30/19 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 5: Meet The Neighbour
I am so glad you decided to continue this story. I don't know where it is headed, but I really like your writing style. Everything seems so natural. The pacing, the detail, the dialogue are all spot on.
I thought I detected a little foreshadowing when Frank experienced a twinge of regret at being labeled a friend, not a boyfriend. I guess we'll see.
Thank you for continuing.