Reviews For The Address
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Reviewer: robertlouis Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/04/19 03:05 am Title: Chapter 1: The Address

I’m really enjoying this delicious low burn of a story. You write beautifully.

Reviewer: blake1 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/04/19 02:26 am Title: Chapter 6: The Search

aw yeah this shit's gonna be cute

Reviewer: blake1 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/04/19 02:26 am Title: Chapter 5: Meet The Neighbour

ayyy love the shout out to my boy Mendo!

you haven't been talking to the copth have ya mate?

Reviewer: CHRIS2K Signed Report
Date: 12/04/19 01:11 am Title: Chapter 6: The Search

excellent

Reviewer: Maria Esperanza Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/04/19 12:56 am Title: Chapter 6: The Search

I love this romance story.

Reviewer: Elron Signed Report
Date: 11/30/19 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 5: Meet The Neighbour

I am so glad you decided to continue this story. I don't know where it is headed, but I really like your writing style. Everything seems so natural. The pacing, the detail, the dialogue are all spot on.

I thought I detected a little foreshadowing when Frank experienced a twinge of regret at being labeled a friend, not a boyfriend. I guess we'll see.

Thank you for continuing.

Reviewer: CHRIS2K Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/19/19 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 2: Room-mates

Nice start

Reviewer: Lillove Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/19/19 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Address

Fingers crossed for a romance! Love it so far

Reviewer: djm3sho Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/19/19 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 2: Room-mates

I am loving this story and really looking forward to see how it progresses!

Reviewer: blake1 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/19/19 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 2: Room-mates

cuuuuute! I like Michelle already

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