Date: 01/18/20 12:19 am Title: Chapter 16: Hello, Gabriella!
Hmmm fighting and running, forcibly dressed? That's a link but I'm not sure if you wrote it that way. If your aim was to
Make him realize or admit what he wanted I think you could have taken a slower, more psychological approach to his transition. Have them make it "a game" or "a one time thing" and then encourage him to settle into herself. More slowly.
Date: 12/08/19 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 Andrew visits his cousins in Texas
I am seriously enjoying this tale! It's sweet, sentimental, and completely believable. I admit, I'm a bit envious of Alexis and the support group she's got around her. We should all be that lucky. Keep up the good work!