Date: 11/16/19 10:27 am Title: It's okay
This is a sweet story with good character development and hints of fascinating worldbuilding, but it needs a lot of editing. There are missing words, odd phrasings, and typos that make it kind of rough to read. If you'd like help proofreading your work, let me know (go to my author page and click "Contact").
Date: 11/15/19 10:28 am Title: It's okay
Pretty nice story about self-discovery and putting the pieces together.
It needs proofreading as there are some weird structures and incorrect words. Same as mixing past and present tense in the narration.
You also added the tag 'Female to Male' in Characters but it's exactly the opposite, 'Male to Female'.