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Reviewer: Zetsumei Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/30/19 04:13 am Title: It's okay

Well done Rainbow! You conveyed the difficulty that realizing ones truth carries with it very well :)

Reviewer: Deepening Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/24/19 06:26 am Title: It's okay

Pretty good story! Not even nearly the same as others from this topic. A bit strange that there is no interest in analysing about the own change, but well written and understandable. Love it!

Reviewer: Limbos Mistress Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/16/19 01:37 pm Title: It's okay

So emotional and heart-touching. I sincerely felt for the protagonist and appreciated that she had friends and family to help her see the true her inside. Bravo and well-done!!

XOXO, LM

Reviewer: bornem Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/16/19 01:21 pm Title: It's okay

Really sweet, and makes me connect with all the characters, I'm glad that all the characters and discussions so far have been so loving

Reviewer: Trismegistus Shandy Signed Report
Date: 11/16/19 10:27 am Title: It's okay

This is a sweet story with good character development and hints of fascinating worldbuilding, but it needs a lot of editing. There are missing words, odd phrasings, and typos that make it kind of rough to read. If you'd like help proofreading your work, let me know (go to my author page and click "Contact").

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/16/19 04:14 am Title: It's okay

Very nice! Of course it doesn't have to stop there, but it's okay.

Reviewer: Sthelen Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/15/19 10:28 am Title: It's okay

Pretty nice story about self-discovery and putting the pieces together.
It needs proofreading as there are some weird structures and incorrect words. Same as mixing past and present tense in the narration.
You also added the tag 'Female to Male' in Characters but it's exactly the opposite, 'Male to Female'.

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