Date: 11/08/19 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
The english needs a lot of work. It causes the writing to feel extremely stilted and fake. In terms of the story itself, a few things stuck out like sore thumbs. The girl used to be a doctor, yet she’s worried she’d be sent back to kindergarten and she needs to study for tests blatantly below her level? Also, Yola lost any and all sympathy from me when she threatened violence on her kid simply for not liking the clothes she’d prepared for her. That’s extremely disgustingly abusive behavior. That woman should not be a mom.