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Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 10/24/19 08:30 pm Title: Moonlight Romance

Cool story, I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: I知 glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: nitewatchman Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/20/19 06:52 pm Title: Tricks and Treats

Nice story with a happy ending. Thanks for posting!

I do admit that I had a chuckle when I read “NO TRUCK OF TREATERS!”, and wondered how many treaters one could fit into a trunk. :)

Author's Response: Lol yeah I知 an awful speller especially with auto fill on my phone oof.

Reviewer: girlwithaguitar Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/20/19 02:47 pm Title: Tricks and Treats

You are so good at writing adorable wish-fufillment stories! Like others have said, it's a bit choppy in places, but I'm willing to overlook that somewhat when it's so cute and it puts so much of a tingle in my tummy!

Author's Response: I知 glad you enjoyed! Yeah I write these on my phone so grammar and punctuation is hard to do sadly.

Reviewer: TyVulpine Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/20/19 02:39 pm Title: Moonlight Romance

Fairly short chapters and some grammar issues (should have separate paragraphs for each person talking, for example) but pretty good story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice and I知 glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: iis18 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/20/19 01:52 pm Title: Tricks and Treats

Cute! I've read most of your stories and they all have this nice vibe where the characters just get to be themselves and live their new lives without too much hassle and I like that.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah I知 gettin a lil tired of stories that people need to forget of be punished so a few more sweet ones are on the way :3.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/20/19 11:24 am Title: Moonlight Romance

Nice little love story. Your writing is solid, the pace was good.
One small mixup - at the end you have Jess asking Kira to make it so everyone thinks she (Jess) has always been a girl, not Nicole.
Thank you for writing and please keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks for the help! I got no sleep so my writings been wonky

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