Date: 10/20/19 06:52 pm Title: Tricks and Treats
Nice story with a happy ending. Thanks for posting!
I do admit that I had a chuckle when I read “NO TRUCK OF TREATERS!”, and wondered how many treaters one could fit into a trunk. :)
Author's Response: Lol yeah I知 an awful speller especially with auto fill on my phone oof.
Date: 10/20/19 02:47 pm Title: Tricks and Treats
You are so good at writing adorable wish-fufillment stories! Like others have said, it's a bit choppy in places, but I'm willing to overlook that somewhat when it's so cute and it puts so much of a tingle in my tummy!
Author's Response: I知 glad you enjoyed! Yeah I write these on my phone so grammar and punctuation is hard to do sadly.
Date: 10/20/19 01:52 pm Title: Tricks and Treats
Cute! I've read most of your stories and they all have this nice vibe where the characters just get to be themselves and live their new lives without too much hassle and I like that.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah I知 gettin a lil tired of stories that people need to forget of be punished so a few more sweet ones are on the way :3.
Date: 10/20/19 11:24 am Title: Moonlight Romance
Nice little love story. Your writing is solid, the pace was good.
One small mixup - at the end you have Jess asking Kira to make it so everyone thinks she (Jess) has always been a girl, not Nicole.
Thank you for writing and please keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks for the help! I got no sleep so my writings been wonky