Reviews For Helloween
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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/16/19 10:01 pm Title: Day 31 - Ebil Wizard Man/The End

Excellent story, you are very creative. Too bad it wasn't longer, I'm sure it would have been very entertaining to learn more about each person who was changed. I really liked the way you handled the T-rexes. Otherwise the party would have ended much earlier. Maybe next year Emmi could throw another party with a few different costumes. Like a two-person horse, or Godzilla.
Great job, very well written. Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Day Dreamer Signed Report
Date: 10/13/19 02:46 am Title: Day 1 - The Halloween Party

Thanks for the many, brief chapters. Fun concept and a well-written story. Plenty of TG, although you didn't dive too deep into any of the characters' experiences, and you have each of them kind of forget who they were before, so there's not as much "interesting" dysphoria, but that's OK. Was still a fast and pleasant read. Wouldn't have minded if "the end" continued through the conclusion of the party and the next day, what do people remember?

Author's Response: Thank you! The idea was 31 original stories with the intention of writing one each day of October leading up to Halloween. Unfortunately, I wasn't able to expand on the stories as I would have liked given the timeframe I had given myself. In fact, there were days where it was a huge struggle to write the story idea and the super short chapters reflect that. As for all the characters remembering what happened when they change back? All they'll remember is attending the best Halloween party ever.

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