Reviews For Gluttony Squared
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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/09/19 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Reading this story is like watching a train wreck - you just can't look away. This is quite possibly the most disgusting story I've ever read. I keep picturing those people from "My 600 Pound Life".

I had the expectation that the alien device would swap James and maybe Katie with one /both of the fat girls. Then the girls inside the thinner bodies would refuse to swap back, and it would be up to James and Katie to do the girl's web job to make money.

I'll keep reading to follow the alien technology, and to see if James can escape this hell he is trapped in.

Other than that, the story is well written. It spans quite a large time frame (several months, at least). Maybe not leap so far at one time?

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