Reviews For Leathermancer
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Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/08/19 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

I liked it. It definitely could be expanded on if you wanted.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/08/19 12:20 am Title: Chapter 1

That was an interesting story. Never heard of a leathermancer. Kind of a niche trade. I would have thought they could let him off with a warning. He probably didn't know that he could not change anyone without their permission. And he didn't do anything bad. Seems like they may have needed another witch for the coven for a while, so already had plans for him and just needed an excuse.
Thank you for writing and good luck.

Reviewer: Rushica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/07/19 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this story. Would love to see it continued. There is so much you could do with it.

Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed Report
Date: 10/07/19 04:25 am Title: Chapter 1

This idea a beautiful story and I believe it deserves at least one continued chapter to round out its open ending

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/06/19 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent storyline,you should write more of,having her move in with the witch she first helped or changed, all she wanted to do was help others. The other witch to befriend her and teach her. You have plenty to work with.

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/06/19 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Love it.

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