Reviews For Ariel
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Reviewer: Kayla McCloud Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/13/19 03:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Like others have mentioned, this is definitely a unique story within the site, and I’m honestly a big fan of the idea! I love this original approach that you’ve taken with the transformation, as well as the creation of an alien culture!
Though you’ve said you’re a little unsure if you would right more, I’d definitely be interested in seeing this being expanded upon!

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/08/19 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Clearly one of the weirdest stories on this site. Also extraordinarily creative, original, and excellent scifi. The artwork is extremely impressive. If you did that yourself, then Wow! If someone else drew it for you, please let them know I thought it was excellent a far superior to most. One final thing, you should credit the artwork so we know who did it.

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/05/19 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice story, not really explicit, no real violence and the sex was described by a third party and not graphic. Imaginative, would love a sequel where a trans researcher returns after hearing about the first story to try and get changed and become female.

Author's Response: Thank you. I wasn't exactly sure in which category I'm supposed to put this story because of the mating description and transformation. I'm a bit cautious fellow so following the rule "better careful than sorry" I labeled it as explicit. As for possible sequels, I'm not entirlely sure if I should make one. I've been thinking about one describing what followed the transformation and how our hero was adapting to living in a completely new environment as a female member of an alien species, or maybe the nameless researcher comming back, but for the time being I don't have any ideas how to proceed with such story and I think it's better to not add anything that could ruin the original story. At least not until I come up with something that stands up to the original.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/04/19 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that was a really creative story. You provided tremendous detail to give your story 3 dimensions. I felt like I was on the planet watching the story unfold. I can't wait to read more of your 'tails' haha
Thanks for writing down your ideas.

Author's Response: Not sure if I'll be making any more "tails" but I hope my next stories will cause such excitment :)

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/04/19 12:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Excellent storyline.

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