A good start, you set it up clearly and went straight to the sexy funtimes. I figure you can make this last a dozen chapters or so. I figure there should be one or more threesomes in their future.
Hope this is continued. Dont leave us hanging:)
I’m absolutely loving this! Please don’t stop writing!!
Chapter 2/3. The style and content was just right and it was so hot. These two characters have a journey to complete and i want see their progress.....
This seems like a very hot and sexy story so far! I'm quite interested to see more!