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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/11/19 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm so glad to see that Cass' mom is willing to help out Josie. This should be interesting. More than just changing Jose's lineage. Got to make some serious changes to her father as well.

Author's Response: Yeah Iím gonna have lots of fun with this.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/12/19 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 2

Very positive and uplifting story. I'll bet lots of people wish they had a teacher like that.

I want to feel bad for Cassie's parents losing a child, but it is clear they didn't want one and Cassie just suffered for it.

Maybe Cassie's mom can do something to improve Jose's situation as well?

Author's Response: Yeah! Iím actually working on that part of the story now(doing something about Josies dad.)

Reviewer: Rushica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/27/19 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really like it so far. Would love to read more.

Author's Response: Iím glad! I plan to maybe add more once I figure out where to go from here.

Reviewer: girlwithaguitar Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/27/19 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay so this is literally one of the cutest and happiest stories I've ever read on this site! Outside of a bit of formatting changes (ie more line breaks/paragraphs) it's amazing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah I was in a bit of a rush but Iíll format soon <3.

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