Reviews For Roommates
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Reviewer: Saklad Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/29/19 10:18 am Title: Roommates

The penultimate paragraph has "Alexa" instead of "Alyssa".

Author's Response: Thanks! Fixed!!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/27/19 04:19 pm Title: Roommates

Wow, very erotic story. Excellent detail, felt like I was right there. Wish I had been.

Only negative was the 2nd or 3rd person dialogue. Just gets old fast.

Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: baq17 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/26/19 09:41 pm Title: Roommates

This is gonna be a bit of a rant, so bear with me. I’m a cis man, and I primarily write and read stories on this site because it gets me off a bit. Just being honest. I’ve never read a story on this site in the “second person,” where the main character is addressed as “you” the entire time. I spent the entire time reading the main character’s transformation wishing I could have my eyes closed with a girl reading this to me so I could really imagine it for myself. Thank you as always for writing! Hope to hear your thoughts on my stories soon.

A friend and fan,

Baq

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