Date: 12/25/19 07:30 pm Title: Parts 06-12
Chapter 3 - I'm really starting to like Allison a lot more. She seemed annoying initially, but she's smart, quick-thinking, and helpful. Her twist clearly gave her a raw deal.
Author's Response: Allison was a fun character to write just because of the nature of her twist. She would definitely be tough to get along with, but she very much wants to help people even if her twist makes it difficult.
Date: 12/25/19 07:08 pm Title: Parts 06-12
Part 8 - "I would think, a mother’s love would see past such things." He spoke in a calm, collected manner that almost seemed to make his response nonchalant. If it hadn’t been the firestorm of fury that was brewing in his eyes I never would have guessed that he was angry."
Correct response, Megan's Dad. So many of these stories feature parental rejection. I understand the story-telling reasons for that, so this isn't a criticism. But it makes them hard to read.