Reviews For No Way Home
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Reviewer: miara Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/29/19 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 8

cant wait how this continues

Reviewer: miara Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/24/19 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 7

Loved the part with the coffee and how humiliation it was for him, seeing his former "bitch" together with a boy, and how you said boys and girls now saw him differently, and the ending was also awesome how he tried to flirt with this girl and just got a disgusted look. Please dont make him gay or bi or "a sissy", he needs to stay totally straight, making a nightmare to come true, when he has suddenly a dick inf ront of his face at osme point, from some young cocky arrogant boy.

Reviewer: miara Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/24/19 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

Very hot. Loved the scene with the boy with her at the cafe, and how he grabbed his ass. Would love to see some forced action sooner or later and some young arrogant asshole studs use him totally unaware he isnt a girl.

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/18/19 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 6

"He barely reached 5'1."

Since he's only exchanging his Y's for X's, if he was 6'5", which is very tall for a guy, he should also be a very tall woman, about 5'11". Also, losing his memory doesn't make a lot of sense either. The physical age regression makes sense, but not the mental part about losing his education.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comment. My stories are not about logic or realism. :) actually most stories here have their own logic and rules and so does mine

Reviewer: miara Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/18/19 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Thank you SO much for writing and sharing. Loved this so far. I know English isnt your first language, but so is mine, dont worry, it is really well written. I cant wait for it being continued. I loved the intro you created with everything towards "That was last week.", that was such a turn on, how you described Adam. I hope you will continue in this, and always remember about this first paragraph, and wont change Adam into a sissy or enjoying being a girl, that would totally ruin the entire plot, at least for me. Thank you so much for writing, again :)

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