Interesting story. I enjoyed it a lot. I got confused from time to time, but that may have been my own fault. The story had lots of dynamic action and it was impressively complex. I'm a fan!
Hey! This is getting really good! I'm loving how Dom mastered that code, and now he and LB are working in unison. I hope there's a way he can stay as LB after 30 days
I love how this story is developing... its sweet and at the same time is sad, and I can't wait to see if Dominic can improve upon the Lady Bullet suit or even something better. I love this tale!
I'm really liking this so far, but it seems Dominic is in for an upsetting time... I hope there is a solution to all of this! This story looks damn cool!