Date: 09/22/19 01:38 am Title: Simone At Last
I love it Chloe! I just wish you had more of the story after the good ending. I enjoy your characters so much I want to see a little bit more of the life after the story. Like an encore or an epilogue.
Regardless i love your work.
Date: 09/21/19 02:25 pm Title: Simone At Last
As always a excellent storyline. I’m work I keep guessing your plots. But I always try to guess the killers or plots in movies and T.V. shows, my wife and I went with a friend of her to see first blood in the movie theater and the friend through I already saw the movie because I nailed the storyline at every point. I’m looking forward to your next story.
Date: 09/20/19 06:43 pm Title: The Collapse
This is pretty cute but minor nitpick. There is no way in hell she'd be fully recovered from GRS after two weeks. Also has she dilated even once? If not, she aint gonna have a vagina to enjoy. Had that happen to a friend, fully closed up, well unless she went with the colon type, then she wont need to dilate but.... the umm odor would be very difficult to hide. Most doctors even with that one, will not let you go back to work or anything resembling work until 2 months minimum because you can literally wreck things down there by moving too much. Not to mention with my own I would pass out after I was allowed to go home (my boyfriend went with me for the first umm let's see january 9th till the 25th to stay in the healing house, doctor wouldn't clear me for work till march minimum but preferred April (I'm disabled but just incase he wanted to make that clear) and let me tell you. It's a ROLLERCOASTER, my body sometimes would get so tired I"d just fall asleep and there was nothing I could do about it. Healing'll do that to you.
Like I said though this is only a minor nitpick, most people don't know about douching or all the stuff you got to do (like dilating 3 times a day, showering twice a day) for GRS (or SRS if that's what you prefer to call it, or GCS, every person has their own name for it IMO)
But despite all the complications I'm currently going through... I wouldn't trade it for the world!!!
Author's Response: I'm sure everything you've said is right. For what it's worth, I usually take a lot of liberty with regard to the details of transformations (and I also describe my characters are being born with highly feminine features). Mine are, therefor, a bit fantastical, just without the actual fantasy or sci-fi element. Reading my stories always requires setting some amount of reality aside.
Date: 09/20/19 03:34 pm Title: The Collapse
UGH! Yes! Fuck that's some sweet catharsis. Killing it Chloe.
On another note, jeez the other characters are so rude. Trey why did you have to specify "in bed" on the note? Did you think Simone needed clarification? Casey what the fuck kind of weird locker room talk is "all girls need to fix their lipstick after they give head"? Kathleen why are you so invested in your friend Brad's sex life after he's been broken up with his ex for seemingly a full year? Y'all need to get your shit together.
Author's Response: Hopefully it right with regard to the other characters. In Rose Purple, I tried to make them all more complex and more realistic. None are completely good or completely bad - more like real life. They might be nice but a little selfish, caring but clueless. I think of Rose Purple as a light romance that's more indie than Disney (if Disney make TG p***). And, thanks for the nice words.
Date: 09/16/19 11:13 pm Title: The Set Up
Poor baby... all her friends are useless and cruel and idiots. They are trying so hard to hold onto who she was and it's sad. True she hasn't come out to them yet but they are NOT helping. She basically came out just subtletly but boys are not always good at subtle *sigh* I'm sorry sweetie. Casey also... he's getting married gonna have to give up on him. Maybe Alex will get his shit together and realize the pretty girl he's been living with all this time. And dan can shut his damn mouth about it too or be supportive!
Date: 09/16/19 10:19 pm Title: Flap
I am really enjoying this work. Just like the Ivy League Girlfriend, I hope this is a happier ending where the two end up together. Simone is a very interesting character and it seems that she jumped into the change so quickly that there must be an underlying story or reason behind it. I'm wondering if any one can suss it out of her. Alex, too, is trying his best to be an understanding person and the misunderstandings it creates makes him both a sympathetic choice as well as an infuriating one. Keep up the good work!