Reviews For The Perfect Bride
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Reviewer: Zaydin Signed Report
Date: 08/27/19 02:34 am Title: Ch. 1: Dress Shopping

Honestly feels like a massive case of disproportionate retribution here.

Author's Response: Perhaps... thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/26/19 05:40 pm Title: Ch. 7: All Feels Right

Thinking about it some more, if the change is permanent, then Hayley is really getting screwed, even if she doesn't know it. Maybe introduce another guy into the story so that Ash and Hayley could have a double wedding.
Again, great job on the story.
Next!

Author's Response: Thank you! Keep leaving comments please! -Baq

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/26/19 05:30 pm Title: Ch. 7: All Feels Right

Well, I was wondering what would happen after he turned into the prefect bride. I was expecting the change to be temporary - just to make him learn his lesson. I am glad Wanda left his mind intact, nothing to gain if he loses that.
Overall a nice short complete story, but one that could easily be expanded or given a sequel, maybe one where Ash can be Hayley's Maid of honor someday.
Maybe Wanda could give Ash one last chance to get his life back - if he has truly learned his lesson.
Thanks for writing - I feel like you are writing just for me.

Author's Response: I'll address each part of your review - 1. Identity death stories are fun to write, but it's more fun to watch the transformed girl figure out her new life. 2. It does set up nicely for a sequel where Ashlyn could be Hayley's maid of honor, I really like that idea and will add it to my list of stories to write! 3. As you've seen with my stories, I really prefer to leave my characters as the fairer sex once I've transformed them - and who would want to turn back with the bodies I gift them! 4. I'm curious to hear your thoughts on Caught in the Closet, Pink Internship, and others I haven't seen your comments on. I write for everyone, but I love reading your feedback because of how detailed you get. Thanks for being so vocal. -Baq

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/26/19 03:23 pm Title: Ch. 4: The Perfect Bride?

Oh man, this is really getting good!
I'll bet his bride will really enjoy his attitude adjustment.

Author's Response: Thank you! Keep the feedback coming! And I meant to say in the response to your last review - would it really be one of my stories if I didn't give the transformed girl a set of huge b****? -Baq

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/23/19 11:02 pm Title: Ch. 1: Dress Shopping

Starts off quickly, but you stopped at a good point. I'm trying to figure out if he gets turned into a bride:
- as punishment for complaining about the cost.
- as a curse for seeing the bride in her dress.
- in order to pay for the up charge on the dress, like modeling wedding dresses.
Can't wait to see which way this goes. And keep the boobs big, because, well, just because.

Author's Response: I'll confirm that one of those three guesses is correct, but I won't tell you which it is (you'll just have to wait and see)! And come on, Elron, would it really be one of my stories if I didn't give the transformed girl b****?

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